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Fragments of... - 3 - Eng Ver. by ~kero-no-twilight:iconkero-no-twilight:



-Log XXXX [Access Denied]-

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/*The conversations in this text are not written in its original language*/

--Morning, 19th July, 2009--


- Eri, ¡Eri!, ¡¡Wake Up!!!.

- ¡Mom! ¡¡Close the curtains!!, please~~ - The little girl was yelling, trying to escape from the sunlight that was illuminating her face.

- C'mon, it's time already... -Her mother answered, with a soft tone-!We're getting late if you don't hurry up!

Suddendly, the girl jumped out from her bed and started to run around the whole place, getting all her clothes on a little bag she had near.

- ¡¡Wah!! ¡I was asleep! ¡You told me to get my things done last night and i didn't...

- ...You didn't do it, - her mother finished the sentence, stopping Eri and giving her a bag- and this is not the first time it happens, so i got all of your things ready while you were sleeping.

- ¿Why did you focus that much when you said i was "sleeping"? - The little girl asked, with her crying look and trying to imitate her mother's accent.

- Because you shouldn't became asleep. Ok, ¡Go and take a bath! , ¡And fast if you don't want to make me angry! - She said, taking her to the bathroom.

-----[Missing or Damaged Information - Playing the next undamaged sector]-----

- ¡Let's go! ¡Let's go!, ¿Why did you take so long, my two darlings? - A big man was yelling next to the car.

- ¡¡¡DADDY!!! - The little girl yelled when she saw her father, who was waiting for her with his arms wide open, and then she ran to him.

- My Daughter~, it's been such a long time!. Hello there, my love... -he said while he was giving a kiss to his wife and taking Eri into his arms - ¿Are you ready, now?

- Yes, Charles - The woman answered, making an strange look. -¿Are you sure that everything is OK?

- ...I'll tell you on the road - he said, sitting the child in the back part of the car and giving the seat to his wife - Stay with her, please.

-----[Missing or Damaged Information - Playing the next undamaged sector]-----

- ¡¿What?! - Eri's Mother shouted, without containing herself. - ¡¿What happened to Ralph, and Tana!?

A sepulcral silence was reigning over the ambient...Eri's father was driving through the highway, checking continously his Blackberry's GPS System.

- It can't be... - She said while she was holding her Daughter.

Eri couldn't understand a word of it, and it was noticeable. Even then, she was happy to be able to see her father- Now you're going to spend more time at home, ¿Right, Daddy?

- We're gonna live together now...because i'm not working anymore - He said, looking at her daughter through the mirror and giving her one of those looks that she enjoyed so much - And... we're almost there.

When he turned his face back on the front, a strong light illuminated everyone's faces, and even as Eri's Father made a big turn to avoid it, they felt a big crash on the back part of the car, making everything confuse. And then, Black.

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- ¡¡¡¡¡¡¡ERIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII!!!!!!!!!

--------[ERROR: Damaged Information]-------

Unstopping lights were passing from one side to another
Everything she saw from his right side was dyed red.

- You'll be ok, i'll promise... - His father's voice said, - I won't leave you.

--------[ERROR: Damaged Information]-------

Her father was kissing her, her mother was holding her, a big pit appeared in front of them, absorbing everything around. Its dark water invaded everything, coming up her legs and getting through her mouth, choking her.

The next time she saw was a big tree in a green field, and that it was full of light brown leaves. Some of these leaves were floating alone in the thin air, holding from invisible threads, and, some were dead on the ground.

And a voice speaking in a strange language, from the body that was in the tree's base.

Her mother's body, drenched in blood.

------[ERROR: Damaged Information: Impossible Data.]-------

Log 00009. [-.June 5th.-] [<11:44am>]

[11:45am] Starting System. [OK]

[12:06pm] Checking Memory. [100% Completed]

[12:08pm] Checking Arms and Legs State for the First Time [OK]

[12:49pm] Checking overall working state. [100% Completado]

[13:02pm] Starting Nerve Terminals. [OK]

[13:35pm] Checking Nerve Terminals. [100% Completado]
[OK].


- ¿C h r m? - Eri felt something extremely hot on her right hand, but her body assimilated it quickly and then, she could feel a warm hand holding hers - ¿Ca Yo He r  me  ? , Eri, ¿Ca You hea me now?, Daughter.

The person that was holding her hand was her own father, but there were a lot of things about him she couldn't recognize.
His hair was white, his eyes were looking older and tired and wrinkles surrounded his, some day soft face.

He looked up and saw her daughter, looking at him.

- Oh, i wish i were alive for this moment...
Tears were coming down his eyes, but when they dropped to the sheets, they didn't make it wet. And he disappeared in little squares that vanished in the Air.

[16:48pm] Audiovisual Check Completed

And that's how Eri ended alone, with hundreds of images in her memories, events that never happened, but that her father kindly made so she could understand it all.
Everything that ever happened, and everything that she need to know... to keep on going.

--Afternoon, July 19th, Year XXXX--

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Mwahahaha


[TRANSLATION BY :iconerrorista:]

>D THANKS! :iconerrorista:, Really!

=D this is a Fragment of a story of mine... but it was in spanish, so :iconerrorista: took it and translated it. XD


>D nyan!~

Please comment!! *O*
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in english madafaka!!! XDDD

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Colectivo Aardvark! [link]
blog de videjuegos [link]
my web/portfolio [link]
:stereo:
óOó COMO LO HOMBRE'H

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---Frägmented Dreams of the World.---
"DON'T FIGHT FOR YOUR LIFE! FIGHT FOR YOUR SOUL AND THE FUTURE!" ♫♥
yeah!!!
i love sci-fic
:love:
you... you liked it? *-*

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---Frägmented Dreams of the World.---
"DON'T FIGHT FOR YOUR LIFE! FIGHT FOR YOUR SOUL AND THE FUTURE!" ♫♥
yea,
but...is it happened a bit too fast!!
.-. hmmm

i think so..

but that's the idea, too...
cuz those stories are little fragments from a biggest thing n_n

=D those are sort of "side-stories"

n_n

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---Frägmented Dreams of the World.---
"DON'T FIGHT FOR YOUR LIFE! FIGHT FOR YOUR SOUL AND THE FUTURE!" ♫♥
yea!
i have the experience of writing a story...
that takes a long time *_*(5 months)

that's somehow our english project,
so we printed it out and binded(is that the past tense of bind?!)them into a book...

awwww,
the quality is awful,
but we enjoy it.
- u -
whoa o_o that's cool.

=O English teachers don't do that type of projects here... =__= i wish they do.

Do you have a digital copy of that book? :3 i'll be glad to read it nOn

I think that the main idea is to enjoy writing... n_n there is when the most gorgeous ideas come out of your head @w@


:3 nya.

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---Frägmented Dreams of the World.---
"DON'T FIGHT FOR YOUR LIFE! FIGHT FOR YOUR SOUL AND THE FUTURE!" ♫♥
because we are chinese
the english is quite awful, really...
so there might be lots of grammar mistakes,
sorry.




i will send it to your email

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